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Paraphrase Exercise

Step 1: Find a brief section from a source that you could possibly use in the project you are working on. 

Step 2: Quote the section in full, providing an in-text citation, as if you were using it in your paper.

Step 3: Paraphrase the section, providing an in-text citation, as if you were using it in your paper.

Step 4: Provide a reference citation to the source you are using.

EXAMPLE:

Quotation (Author’s Exact Words)

Direct Quote in My Paper:  
According to Raymond (2017), “Deaths from colon cancer occur twice as often in women as in men, but the media have made it seem that breast cancer is the number one killer of women" (p. 12). This misrepresentation is but one example of how the mass media distort our view women.

Please note:
  1. A signal phrase such as "According to ..." or "Raymond states, . . . " is used to introduce a direct quote. The quote is followed by the student author's own words that integrate the quote into the paragraph.
  2. The author’s last name together with (2009) constitute the in-text citation, which refers to the source listed alphabetically on the last page of your paper. Since the author's name ("Raymond") is mentioned in the sentence, it is not repeated inside the parentheses.
  3. Any direct wording from the original source must be in quotation marks.
  4. In-text citations use only the author's last name, not any initials.


Paraphrase (Rewritten in My Phrasing)

Paraphrase in My Paper: 
Although twice as many women die from colon cancer as men, the media choose to focus on breast cancer as the main threat to women's health (Raymond, 2017, p. 12). 
This misrepresentation is but one example of how the mass media distort our view women.

Please note:
  1. Key words of the original have been repeated ("women," "media," "colon cancer," "breast cancer") but the quote has been successfully translated into the author's own phrasing.
  2. The in-text citation appears at end of the sentence with the author's name inside parentheses.
  3. The period for the sentence goes after the citation.
  4. The paraphrase is followed by the student author's own words that integrate the source material into the paragraph.

Reference Citation

Raymond, P. (2017). Colon cancer: Healthy women. Retrieved October 21, 2017 from http://www.healthywomen.org/condition/colon-cancer

Help with reference citation formats: Perhaps the best list of citation formats on the web can be found on this page of the UMUC Library: http://sites.umuc.edu/library/libhow/apa_examples.cfm

The citation generator CiteFast produces both in-text and reference citations. Here is a video on how to use CiteFast: